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  1. mekpride

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    if loving is wrong
    then i m glad to be that wrong
    if loving is wrong
    then my heart wont let me be right
    u were right when u told me
    that sorrow makes u write poetry
    cz
    here i m with the pain in my heart
    with my pen writing poems i start
    here i m missing u every night
    till the first sun's bright
    if loving u is a crime
    then i m guilty in charge
    i give my all
    to have a chance with u
    i give my all
    to be close to u
    if u want it or not
    i will always care about u
    i will always ...love u
    it's ok
    that's my fate that's my destiny
    but
    dont u ever ask me to forget u
    that's the only thing i can't do
    cz it's simply
    u are asking me to forget my self
    u are asking me to forget my soul
    cz that's what u are to me


    by/me
     
  2. emy48

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    I wanna comment on the poem by the way of writing not by the subject itself !!!
    cz I didn't have words to say...

    it's one of the pretty poems that you writ
    it's really good
    "I'm sorry if I'd ever did bad "
    I just wish that the next will be better than the last
    !!
    thx for sharing
    good luck
    and see u


    Gree -emy48- tings
     
  3. mekpride

    mekpride :: عضو مُشارك ::

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    oh !!! Thanks emy
    for ur sweet comment
    oh no there is nothing to be sorry of
    actuelly i m greatfull and happy
    that i have her in my life
    if i had 2 hearts i will love her twice
    if i had the chance to back in time
    and change it i wont change it a bit
    any way..thanks for droping by
    take care
     

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