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mekpride

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#1
if loving is wrong
then i m glad to be that wrong
if loving is wrong
then my heart wont let me be right
u were right when u told me
that sorrow makes u write poetry
cz
here i m with the pain in my heart
with my pen writing poems i start
here i m missing u every night
till the first sun's bright
if loving u is a crime
then i m guilty in charge
i give my all
to have a chance with u
i give my all
to be close to u
if u want it or not
i will always care about u
i will always ...love u
it's ok
that's my fate that's my destiny
but
dont u ever ask me to forget u
that's the only thing i can't do
cz it's simply
u are asking me to forget my self
u are asking me to forget my soul
cz that's what u are to me


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emy48

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#2
I wanna comment on the poem by the way of writing not by the subject itself !!!
cz I didn't have words to say...

it's one of the pretty poems that you writ
it's really good
"I'm sorry if I'd ever did bad "
I just wish that the next will be better than the last
!!
thx for sharing
good luck
and see u


Gree -emy48- tings
 

mekpride

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#3
i wanna comment on the poem by the way of writing not by the subject itself !!!

cz i didn't have words to say...

it's one of the pretty poems that you writ
it's really good
"i'm sorry if i'd ever did bad "
i just wish that the next will be better than the last
!!
thx for sharing
good luck
and see u


gree -emy48- tings

oh !!! Thanks emy
for ur sweet comment
oh no there is nothing to be sorry of
actuelly i m greatfull and happy
that i have her in my life
if i had 2 hearts i will love her twice
if i had the chance to back in time
and change it i wont change it a bit
any way..thanks for droping by
take care
 
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