Maho no yume

cute angel

:: عضو مُشارك ::
Peace be upon you,
Hello,everyone
It has been a long time since I wrote a poem,it is an English poem mixed up with some Japanese words.
Let’s first see the glossary:
Maho=magic
No=my
Yume=dream(maho no yume=my magical dream)
Yuki=snow
Tsuki=the moon
Watashi no honto jibun no chara=my real self character
Watashi wa a maho spirit=I am a magical spirit
Dakara=that’s why
Ureshii kokoro=happy heart
The poem,

Maho no yume;
When the sand covered with white yuki;
And the night showed the silver tsuki
The waves came softly
Carrying a tune so heavenly
To the shore where there were hints
Made up of small foot-prints
Directed to the near mountain
Where there was a maho fountain
But it wasn’t flowing
And the babbles were not glowing
It was a mirror of cold ice
Through which you can see the reflection of your face
The prints kept going
To and fro without knowing
About all the spirits around
That were chained to the ground
Seeking relief and freedom
To live happily in their kingdom
Watashi no honto jibun no chara
Was one of those maho spirits
Dakara the prints opened the door
Of darkness,sadness and sore
And gave sorrow wings to fly
To disappear through the door in the sky
At that moment the fountain came to life
And made all the spirits safe
Because it was the beating heart
That was given a chance to start
Spreading happiness during warmth and cold
Among young spirits and old
Watashi wa a maho spirit
That had a ureshii kokoro
16/7/2010
:heh:
 
آخر تعديل:
Peace be upon you,
Hello,everyone
It has been a long time since I wrote a poem,it is an English poem mixed up with some Japanese words.




:scared:
my style
:laugh:
:wink:

J'm now
Un Dos Tres into la vida


Let’s first see the glossary:
Maho=magic
No=my
Yume=dream(maho no yume=my magical dream)
Yuki=snow
Tsuki=the moon
Watashi no honto jibun no chara=my real self character
Watashi wa a maho spirit=I am a magical spirit
Dakara=that’s why
Ureshii kokoro=happy heart
The poem,



it's better putting a glossary
so, without that glossary i'll really
c
:cursing: nfuse



Maho no yume;
When the sand covered with white yuki;
And the night showed the silver tsuki
The waves came softly
Carrying a tune so heavenly
To the shore where there were hints
Made up of small foot-prints
Directed to the near mountain
Where there was a maho fountain
But it wasn’t flowing
And the babbles were not glowing
It was a mirror of cold ice
Through which you can see the reflection of your face
The prints kept going
To and fro without knowing
About all the spirits around
That were chained to the ground
Seeking relief and freedom
To live happily in their kingdom
Watashi no honto jibun no chara
Was one of those maho spirits
Dakara the prints opened the door
Of darkness,sadness and sore
And gave sorrow wings to fly
To disappear through the door in the sky
At that moment the fountain came to life
And made all the spirits safe
Because it was the beating heart
That was given a chance to start
Spreading happiness during warmth and cold
Among young spirits and old
Watashi wa a maho spirit
That had a ureshii kokoro
16/7/2010
:heh:


OOooooOOOOoOo :yahoo: OOOoOoOoooOoO

really good mixing & great meanings
i love Japanese but i haven't a time to learn it
naruto & one piece
goooooooood
:thumb_up1:


 
very nice poem
arigato gazai masu
 
thx sis


really nice words



!!! i like it a lot


keep on writing



thannnnnnnnnnnnnnnk you









 
:scared:
my style
:laugh:
:wink:​







it's better putting a glossary
so, without that glossary i'll really


c
:cursing: nfuse







OOooooOOOOoOo :yahoo: OOOoOoOoooOoO

really good mixing & great meanings
i love Japanese but i haven't a time to learn it
naruto & one piece
goooooooood
:thumb_up1:





Konnichi wa

Hello

Thanks a lot for that nice comment

I said it before why shouldn't I mix up some Japanese and English the way you did with French and English and here is the poem

thanks a lot

Regards
 
thx sis



really nice words



!!! i like it a lot


keep on writing



thannnnnnnnnnnnnnnk you


Hi,sweet angel

thanks a lot for those words

I'm always longing to see your comments
:heh:
thanks again

regards
 
great words......really unique idea
it shows your creativity
thank you for sharing
 
great words......really unique idea

it shows your creativity

thank you for sharing


Hi ,sister

thanks a lot for that nice comment I do really appreciate that
but it is thanks to Mr odd's idea of french and English

Regards
 
you really have the ability to create
an amazing poems
that one is special.. i like it and
i like japanese words
thanks cuty for sharing this with us
and...
good luck with that
 
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