this is true

[sanaya]

Love is not money
Is not beauty.
Is not fame .
Love is heart
It beats for you.
Is felling sad even u are sad
And is felling happy even u smile
Distance does not diminish love
Bcz the true love
Is stay always in haert
Even if the distance is far away
Meriem

 

[sanaya]

@missing heart
@الأفق البعيد @"viola"

 

[Only me]

Love is not money
Is not beauty( the subject is messing)
Is not fame here also.
Love is heart
It( the heart or love???) beats for you.
Is feelling sad even( irrelevant) u are sad
And is felling happy even u smile the same here
Distance does not diminish love
Bcz the true love
Is stay( never use 2 verbs) always ( always comes before the verb) in haert
Even if the distance is far away

Hello darling, first i like what u hv wrote
your words are meaningful but you need to correct some mistakes to make it more powerful
i hv tried to correct some of your mistakes ( nchlh mankounech Samta:p) but i want you really to write much better
here i hv tried to reorder your ideas, hope u'll like it

love is neither money nor beauty
love was never for fame
love is the heart that beats for you
It is feeling sad when you are really sad,
it is feeling happy when you smile
Despite distances, true love always stays in heart

once again , i wanna thank you for your effort
good luck ​

 

["viola"]

مشاهدة المرفق 64092
Love is not money
Is not beauty.
Is not fame .
Love is heart
It beats for you.
Is felling sad even u are sad
And is felling happy even u smile
Distance does not diminish love
Bcz the true love
Is stay always in haert
Even if the distance is far away
Meriem

Nice words sis ..there are just few mistakes tht u hv to pay attention to
Well, first for the ones in yellow , u shouldn't start with verbs ..so u have to use the pronoun "it" for example u must say: it is not beauty
Also , i think tht u have a spelling mistake with the verb: feeling
For tenses, i think that it is better to use only one tense in one piece of writing since u've used the present tense at the beginning, then u've shifted to present continuous
And here :Is stay always in haert, u have to say : it always stays in heart
that's it sis ^^ i hope u get it and gd luck


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