a nice english story ...by us

[Black heart]

Okey Girl I will Try tOo , that's my idea: ....mmm
Mary and Lena were like sisters or more and their retention together has always raised the jealousy some *****, which made ​​them try to distinguish between them
i hope you 'll like it


Is this the whole story?​

 

[مروة 95]

she passed all the summer in her new city and when the school began ;she started know her class's friends she founded a girl named Lyna
Lyna was in the same age of Mary she helped her a lot in knowing other friends . Lyna was exactly like Mary ; they had the same thought and the same hobbies , for this ; they spent all the time together , they
was looking like sisters or more than it .
one day ; Marry's mother was so ill ; Marry didn't go to school for about a week, Lyna didn't leave her friend alone , she stood with her , helped her in home , gave her the school's lesson till the day when Marry's mother cured .
Marry was verry happy and returned to the school with her best friend
they was looking so happy together
and their retention has made the jealousy to some *****


what's your opinion *****
??
a small addition i wish
you like it ​

 

[مروة 95]

Okey Girl I will Try tOo , that's my idea: ....mmm

Mary and Lena were like sisters or more and their retention together has always raised the jealousy some *****, which made ​​them try to distinguish between them
i hope you 'll like it​

Is this the whole story?​

no sis
any one of us complet
where the last one
stopped


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[Black heart]

Yes, the story is beautiful and exciting for me, thank you Marwa and ***** on the effort.​

 

[مروة 95]

Yes, the story is beautiful and exciting for me, thank you Marwa and ***** on the effort.​

Thanks sis

you can help us in it

so

you can add your

touches in it
​

 

[Black heart]

Ok I will try my sister​

 

[Black heart]

Mary and her friend were very sympathetic. One day wandering girl came calling Mary told her she needed in something important and we must tell them, and that was jealous of ***** who tempted them. Accepted that Mary tells her
Told her the girl. Today I will tell you about reality that your girlfriend Beat dearest friend. Lina It's a girl as bad as it is jealous of you. But Mary did not listen to her words and told her thank you for your interest me.

One day this girl came back and asked Mary to tell her Mary accepted , but this topic time tried to convince mary that her friend is bad
it just a tryyyyy​

 

[مروة 95]

Mary and her friend were very sympathetic. One day wandering girl came calling Mary told her she needed in something important and we must tell them, and that was jealous of ***** who tempted them. Accepted that Mary tells her
Told her the girl. Today I will tell you about reality that your girlfriend Beat dearest friend. Lina It's a girl as bad as it is jealous of you. But Mary did not listen to her words and told her thank you for your interest me.

One day this girl came back and asked Mary to tell her Mary accepted , but this topic time tried to convince mary that her friend is bad

it just a tryyyyy​

Thanks sis

for helping


i'll add this idea
Just some changes ​

 

[مروة 95]

Mary and her friend were very sympathetic , the ***** didn't want to see this both together they tried to distinguish between them
One day a wandering girl told Lyna that her girl friend is Just a selfish Girl ; was Looking just for her interest , she wanted you just for helping . Lyna didn't accept this speech and went far from this girl but she didn't tell Marry about it . ​

 

[Black heart]

Marwa Yes You have done a good job
thank you​

 

[مفآهيمـ الخجل]

Marwa u did amazing job ​

god bless u​

I like all what u wrote​

 

[Black heart]

Marwa You Knowing the ideas at the summit of excellence. I wish you the best​

 

[مروة 95]

some days after ; Lyna did a party in her hose
On the occasion of her Success , she invited all her friends and sure her best friend " Marry " but Marry was so ill , she stood in bed , she told one of her friends to Connect her appologize to Lyna , the friend didn't connect it to Lyna .
Lyna waited Marry all the night but she didn't come , she was afraid for her but the ***** told her that Marry Showed to them that she was a selfish friend who Jealouses of your Success . Lyna was so angry and she decieded to don't speak with Marry never .... ​

 

[مروة 95]

Marwa u did amazing job ​

god bless u​

I like all what u wrote​

Marwa You Knowing the ideas at the summit of excellence. I wish you the best​

thanks a lot sisters
what's about the last
addition ​

 

[مفآهيمـ الخجل]

some days after ; Lyna did a party in her hose

On the occasion of her Success , she invited all her friends and sure her best friend " Marry " but Marry was so ill , she stood in bed , she told one of her friends to Connect her appologize to Lyna , the friend didn't connect it to Lyna .

Lyna waited Marry all the night but she didn't come , she was afraid for her but the ***** told her that Marry Showed to them that she was a selfish friend who Jealouses of your Success . Lyna was so angry and she decieded to don't speak with Marry never .... ​

I liiiiiike it
Tonight I will complete it​

 

[مروة 95]

I liiiiiike it


Tonight I will complete it​

thanks
so i'll let it to you
sis

Good luck Maram​

 

[Black heart]

wow sis marwa that good​

 

[مفآهيمـ الخجل]

Okayyy

Now it's mine

thank u marmora​

 

[رونق]

hey every one
how are you
I've tried to complete the story & here's what i've got
***********
few days later marry got better so she went to see lyna cause she missed her very much but surprisnly ,lyna didn't want to talk to her .Marry got back home very sad and confused ,she phoned lyna to know what's the problem but she didn't ansawr
A hole week passed away ,and the tow b.f.f are not talking to each other ,lyna thinks that marry is so selfish and marry is really misrable because she's all alone now
********
this is all what i could write for this moment
I'll try to complete it later​

 

[مروة 95]

hey every one

how are you
I've tried to complete the story & here's what i've got
***********
few days later marry got better so she went to see lyna cause she missed her very much but surprisnly ,lyna didn't want to talk to her .Marry got back home very sad and confused ,she phoned lyna to know what's the problem but she didn't ansawr
A hole week passed away ,and the tow b.f.f are not talking to each other ,lyna thinks that marry is so selfish and marry is really misrable because she's all alone now
********
this is all what i could write for this moment

I'll try to complete it later​

Good Job
just some mistakes
i'll correct it
if i had one correct it ​