a nice english story ...by us

[مروة 95]

few days later ; marry felt better so she went to see lyna cause she missed her very much but what's surprised ! lyna didn't want to talk to her .Marry went back home very sad and confused ,she phoned lyna to know what's the problem but she didn't answer
A hole week passed away ,and the two best friend didn't talk to each other ,lyna thinked that marry was so selfish and marry was really misrable because Lyna was her best and only friend , and there she was all alone in that new city
it was so hard to Marry ....

 

[مفآهيمـ الخجل]

Hi

I brought my complete

tell me ur opinion

and of caurse marmora correct my mistakes please hhh

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of caurse after all this speach of jealousy girls ..Lyna start believe them because she think that Mary was realy selfish and jealous from her ...so she stoped talking with her and started lounging with other girls ...of caurse Mary was'nt know any thing about Lyna's actions
and jealousy girls did'nt stop here only....they go to Mary and told her that Lyna was wont to be side-tracked only and Now she always make fun to them of caurse by Lyna's actions Mary believe the girls and became hate Lyna and wont revenge her
and with the passage of days ..The friends started miss some of them and finaly Lyna decided to go to Mary and talking with her ..may be they will find a solution for this problem wich affected their friendship and praise be to Allah they back together and better than befor and each one of them Known the real meaning of friendship and the value of her friend
and they set up a concert on the accasion of back together and they live as the best friends​

what do u think about it

??​

 

[مروة 95]

wooooooooooooooooooooow

wonderful words

i'll come to correct

some mistakes

of course in tense
hhhhhhhh ​

 

[مفآهيمـ الخجل]

hhhhh

I know there is a lot of them

I wait u​

 

[مروة 95]

after the jealousy girls 's speeches Lyna started believe them because she thinked that Mary was really selfish and jealous from her .so she stoped talking with her and started lounging with the other girls . in other side ; Mary was'nt know any thing about Lyna's actions
and jealousy girls did'nt stop here only, they went to Mary and told her that Lyna wanted to be side-tracked only and she always made fun with them ,by Lyna's actions Mary believed the girls and became hate Lyna and wanted to revenge her
day after day , month after month ,the friends started missing her best moments together . so , Lyna decided to go to Mary and talk with her may be they will find a solution for this problem wich affected their friendship and praise be to Allah they came back together and better than befor and each one of them knew the real meaning of friendship and the value of her friend
and they set up a concert on the accasion of back together and they lived as the best of friends

 

[مفآهيمـ الخجل]

good job marmora

god bless u

so we will put it like that or add some thing
??
i think we mus'nt make it very tall story​

 

[مروة 95]

we can't make it so tall

cause it's for


" magazine "

i gave it

we wait their

opinions

this the site

https://www.4algeria.com/forum/t/288435​

 

[مروة 95]

thanks to all ​

of you sisters ​

we made a Good job ​

Maram
Zahra
Asira
Amoulla
black heart
رونق​

thanks to all of you ​

 

[مفآهيمـ الخجل]

Okayyy

I will see it Now​

 

[مفآهيمـ الخجل]

Go0d Job

Go0d LucK for us

thank u every body​

 

[Black heart]

Thank you Marwa and ومفاهيم الخجل . Congratulations you've done a good job.​

Accept my traffic​

 

[مفآهيمـ الخجل]

u welcome honey

we all did a good job

Good LucK 4 us​

 

[مروة 95]

Thank you Marwa and ومفاهيم الخجل . Congratulations you've done a good job.​

Accept my traffic

u welcome honey


we all did a good job


Good LucK 4 us
​

Thanks sisters

Good luck ​

 

[zaho1994]

thnk you very match

 

[loca]

hi girls i wrote with safaà o short § but she didn't correct it yet
so don't worry girls
franchment moi j'aime pas l'anglais c pour ça je ne peux pas le corect
je l'ecris en arabe et safaà fait le reste
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