wHiSpEr Of My ShAdOw

[kokazita]

when i put my head..on my pillow
somehow..i can see from my window
my shadow holds my sadness and a lot of sorrow
i know..i shouldn't feel like this..now
but..what i can do..if i feel so empty and hollow

WrItTeN..sUrE..By..mE

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[SaRa QuEeN]

wow it's wonderfull
carry on
good luck

 

[مارجوري]

great topic hony...your words are amazing
keep writting​

 

[best-arch]

WONDERFULL.........WAITING FOR YOUR NEW
KEEP ON SISTER.........THANKS



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[kokazita]

thnx...for all ur comments.......BEST-ARCH.....MARJORY.....SARA QUEEN.....thnx a lo:001_wub:O:001_wub:001_wub:t​

 

[f.artist]

nice it's great words but i have a note if u don't mind u r words r great and meaningfull but they r not tuned when someone read it can't feel that r live in the words if u give live to u r words they will be in one word..... woooow and thx

 

[kokazita]

nice it's great words but i have a note if u don't mind u r words r great and meaningfull but they r not tuned when someone read it can't feel that r live in the words if u give live to u r words they will be in one word..... woooow and thx

thnx for ur comment..but i think..if u just read my words again..u will feel it....and by the way u shouldn't feel it...just like it..it's so enough.....that i feel them...and thnx again​