the first time I saw You

[مارجوري]

The first time I saw You
I can't explaine
if it was my heart chaking
or I became insane
your eyes took me away,your smell even your smile
The first time I saw You the world arawnd me stopped for while
when I saw you that day
even a word I couldn't say
coz my soul gone away
that's why you chould know
I will never let You go



by:me
give me ur opinion
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[kokazita]

mmm...so nice words.......u surprise me girl...waw...keep writing.....i will keep reading....lol i already wait ur new article.....good luck​

 

[مارجوري]

mmm...so nice words.......u surprise me girl...waw...keep writing.....i will keep reading....lol i already wait ur new article.....good luck​

thank you soooooooooooo much...for every thing...for ur comments...and also for supporting me...thnx sweetheart​

 

[f.artist]

i'll say it in one word woooooooooooowww so nice sist keep on u have a sweet imagination
best wishes

 

[kokazita]

thank you soooooooooooo much...for every thing...for ur comments...and also for supporting me...thnx sweetheart​

u r welcoooooooooooooooome​

 

[مارجوري]

i'll say it in one word woooooooooooowww so nice sist keep on u have a sweet imagination
best wishes

thank you sooooooo much f.artist for ur comment

 

[ملكة الحزن]

thank you so much honey
god bless you
really wonderful

 

[مارجوري]

thank you so much honey
god bless you
really wonderful

thnx...for ur comment sweetheart

 

[lilo rok]

awwww touching words...this was my feeling when i saw my b.f
thanx honey keep going
thumbs up ! gr8 job​

 

[مارجوري]

awwww touching words...this was my feeling when i saw my b.f

thanx honey keep going

thumbs up ! gr8 job​

:001_wub:
Thnx...for ur comment
i hope u enjoy it
thnx​

 

[zakia4]

you're so cool girl i like your artical
and this is a nice one kepp on with your great words

 

[مارجوري]

thank you soooooooooooooooo much for ur comment zakia​

 

[angel]

woooooooooooooow


keep writing

ur words r so cute







i love it!!!!!!!!!!ohh yea


keep going


thx a lot sis






















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[مارجوري]

thnx angel ur the best my friend​