A marionnette

cute angel

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A marionnette

In a green serene place under the moon beam

Sat a doll alone sailing in her dream

Looking for happiness for a hope gleam

For a sun to warm her way with it's beam

For a teeming rain with drops so bream

For a pure river with fresh water of a stream


Where she can hear the birds songs echo

And seeing the wind carrying the dancing leaves of a sallow

As wings of a blue tit or a swallow

Sitting there enjoying herself and saying bravo

Suddenly that picture was broken with a flying arrow

Coming from the deep heart of the sorrow



She woke up to find herself chained with a string

As a mer-maid in a cage ordred to sing

Given a flute and a bird with broken wing

And when she heard the clock ding dong

She disappeared using her magic ring

which took her to the green land of spring



Where she lived as a BLUE-Fairy of a mythic

Worl full of bright spells and magic

Cute

7/7/2008 at 11.10pm

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Dr.Odd

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very cute piece sister
i liked it :smile:
it can be an anthem
thank thee
:re_gards:
 

cute angel

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Peace be upon you brother

thanks a lot for those nice words

they are so kind

regards
 

Amira ~

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hello poet... sweet words
i noticed in your poems that iv read
that u wrote it in 2008 and 2009
what about the work of 2010
dont tell that you quit:crying:

see ya:ax_flw:
 

cute angel

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Hello,dearest

Thanks a lot for those nice words they mean a lot to me

and for the poems yes I used to be more creative as a university student but since I started work inspiration bed me goodbye^_^

I try from time to time to write yet I didn't find my real inspiration yet

Thanks a bunch sister
 

مارجوري

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hiiiii
sis cute angel you're really creative this poem is one of my favorites
thank you and keep writing OK
 

cute angel

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Hi,Marjory

Oh thanks a lot dearest sister for those nice words

you are always encouraging me

Regards
 
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