BaD fRienDs ****-

Amira ~

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We have known each other for so many years
But today it became so crystal clear

For years we were so very close
I thought of you much more than most


I thought for years you meant the best for me
But it is so clear now that was not to be


You loved it when things for me went wrong
All the time telling me to be strong


When in fact you were in enjoying every minute
Every failure i had you loved it



When things were good i was happy doing well
You would do everything in your power to spoil it until it fell

Apart and you would have that smirked grin
As if to yourself you knew you would win


To see me fail at what i did
Brought so much pleasure to you as if you were a kid



Now that is about to change for i see you for what you are



A person ill never trust and keep very far

Away from me in everything i think and do

You will never again be able to treat me like a fool
You never really were a friend

Just someone who would only be there when

You would find pleasure from my unhappiness

But i know now i am truly blessed

you are a sad pathetic jealous soul

who never again will i ever show
The love and kindness i have inside

For a friend you are not and i say this with pride

For now i see your such wicked ways
And know that i have been truly saved
 

kokazita

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hi gIrL

OpS.. :scared: ..what that topic

really :closedeyes: u touch me so deeply inside
oh ya

i think the most of us we met that kind of ppl who thought is the right..perfect..best..special friend

but oPs we find that we were sOo stupid so wrong coz we trust them
and we just wasted our times

in fact it start to be a habit to me to meet the wrong friends..hh..ya really

anyway this is the life

i like ur tOpic..i like the way u talked about the wrong friend

an evaluation..of course

tHnX
aNd GoOd LuCk

 

Faiza.Dream

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A nice topic i like it,,
a meaningful one
Good luck for the next :),
 

cute angel

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Oh my beloved friend

you have brought in here today a very wise peice of writing,which I admired a lot

upon my words it's such a fascinating poem if I can call it so

makes me feel sad,sorry and anxious if I do have such friends

coz I hate to be disseved and I do trust people who makes an acquaintance with me

would you accept my sincere words of gratitude for this good peice of advice

your sister cute
 

basma nana

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Really good lyrics
I am sure I will not be a bad friend
Also nice to meet you
Wait for new works
Accepts traffic
 

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We have known each other for so many years
But today it became so crystal clear

Yeah the long time make any thing bright

For years we were so very close
I thought of you much more than most


Ammmm you talk about a lover

I thought for years you meant the best for me
But it is so clear now that was not to be


You loved it when things for me went wrong
All the time telling me to be strong


When in fact you were in enjoying every minute
Every failure i had you loved it



When things were good i was happy doing well
You would do everything in your power to spoil it until it fell

Apart and you would have that smirked grin
As if to yourself you knew you would win


To see me fail at what i did
Brought so much pleasure to you as if you were a kid



Now that is about to change for i see you for what you are



A person ill never trust and keep very far

Away from me in everything i think and do

You will never again be able to treat me like a fool
You never really were a friend

Just someone who would only be there when

You would find pleasure from my unhappiness

But i know now i am truly blessed

you are a sad pathetic jealous soul

who never again will i ever show
The love and kindness i have inside

For a friend you are not and i say this with pride

For now i see your such wicked ways
And know that i have been truly saved

sorry i can't enter between lovers arguing :surrender:
thank Thee
god bless you
.
.
good piece Regards

 

مارجوري

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good work
we really should keep our enemies close but our friend closer to our eyes..:closedeyes:...cz what comes from enemy will not hurt you as it comes from friend
so
good luck
:heh:​
 
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Amira ~

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thank you all for your comments
Dr.Odd its about friendship....bad friends
regards
 

samir60

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it's a good work from you sis. simple and meaningful words

thx again
 
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Amira ~

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you are welcom brother
thank you for your comment
 

Amira ~

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you are welcome sister
thank you for your comment
 

Amira ~

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you are welcom nasamat
thank you for your comment
 

shy_girl

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HellOoo

Really Soo expressive tOpic
SOmetimes we discover lately that we were All the time cheated
By keeping SOme ppl as Dear friends tO us
But we Have tO learn frOm Our mistakes

Soo Nice piece
I like it

Keep Up Sista

Thx a lOot

peace

 

zi_crazy

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you know what
you touch a part of my life when i met this kind of friends
ops, am i say friends
actually i can't call them by friends
may be just persons
who's passed in our life and give as some smacks at our faces
and some lessons in friendship

thank thee

and sa7a ftourek
 
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