I leapt through time

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I leapt through time

I
leapt through time

T
hought it's just a game

T
oday is today and yesterday came

A
nd all things remain the same

T
he future was not so far

A
nd the sky lost each star

E
very dream became a nightmare

W
here was I?when was I?

S
hall I answer or ask who am I?

I
lost every body dear

B
ut gained a sense of fear

B
ecause I played with time

w
hich is not a game

I
looked for a cure

T
o get my life back and feel secure

T
o feel the sense of pure breeze

I
leapt through time again

S
winging on the seconds chain

R
unning after the minutes

C
hasing the fast hours

F
inally,I get my life back

A
nd learnt that time waits for no one

D
on't play with it

J
ust value it

Cute

18/12/2009
 

Faiza.Dream

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Really , i have liked the way u write

Simply , right words, nice organisation !

Good luck for the next :)
 

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good work
i love your new poem.....it's fantastic....woow
it's like a piece of advice....or a wisdom
really nice^_^thnx for sharing dear
take care
 

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good work

i love your new poem.....it's fantastic....woow
it's like a piece of advice....or a wisdom
really nice^_^thnx for sharing dear

take care
Hi,dearest Marjory

I'm always longing to see your replies

they cheer me up

plz would you accept my true words of gratitude for this lovely passage

By the way ,it's the first time I see that you are only 18 with such a good English in hand,I must congratulate you dear:heh:
 

kokazita

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hiii

did i tell u before that i like ur pen..!!..mm

really so nice poem

oh ya the time..the time...we feel that we run with it..as we r in competition..till we don't know who runs behind the other


good work gIrl

ThNx

 

cute angel

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Hello,dearest reader

you are always welcome and you are always pleasing me with your nice comments

I do really appreciate that

regards
 

Amira ~

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fantastic dear
really i like it
it is wonderful peice....alway waiting for your new work
thanks dear so much

 

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Hi,dearest princess

and I'm always waiting for your encouraging posts

thanks a lot

regards
 

basma nana

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Hello my sister
Indeed, words Featured
Thank you for the topic
Wait for the new
Accepts traffic
 

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Hola,

thanks so much sister Basma

that's so kind of you

regards
 

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Hi,dearest Marjory


I'm always longing to see your replies

they cheer me up

plz would you accept my true words of gratitude for this lovely passage


By the way ,it's the first time I see that you are only 18 with such a good English in hand,I must congratulate you dear:heh:
hiiii dear sister
you deserve every comment i posted or every word i said and MORE
:wink:
thank you sooo much.:yahoo:...and i wish i could be as good as you one day dear
thnx again
:heh:
by the way, i read a book for Tahar Watar it called "ALLAZ"its great one....i read the 188 page in just 2 nights....i just can't stop reading it
so i hope you will read it to

have a good day
 

cute angel

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Hi,sweety

I'm happy to hear that you've read one of watar's books for me I couldn't manage to coz I had other things to do.Iadvise you to read those three novels they are the best novels ever

North and South by Elizabth Gaskell


Pride and prejudice by jane austen

Jane Eyre by charlotte bronte

thay are the best

Here is a site that you can use to download books

this page contains North and South book

and ,of course,if you can download the movie you won't regret it I asure you a very fascinating movie that I have everseen

http://manybooks.net/_scripts/send.php
 
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