The mummified dream

cute angel

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The mummified Dream

I'm just a dream got wings to fly
Upon the lakes under the blue sky.
I swim and talk,walk and play;
Sometimes I laugh and others I cry

Upon the silver large lakes
Under the snow soflt flakes
I used to fly and see the lake shakes
And a lot of hope bubbles it makes

I was on my way to catch my train
which was covered with drops of rain
To reach the end of the race and gain
But it wasn't a train just a ruin

I was like Hiraclius
Who done the twelve orders
I was like Alexander the Great
Who passed all borders
But both died without reaching
Their bigest dreams
And so do I,I'm dead waiting to be alive

again

I'm mummified and been hiden under the big oak tree
Waiting for an archeologist to come and find me
I'm just like a phoenix
From ashes I come to life
wait for me and you'll see

31/3/2009

at 9.45 p.m

__________cute angel________
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مارجوري

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hiiiii sis
as usual....great work
words can not describe how much i like it.....wonderful
*
the dream....it's a thing seems to be very close to reach.....but in fact....it's very far from the reality
*
keep on sis
thank you
 

shy_girl

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gOod wOrK
I like it
Keep up always with the best

Thx fOr Sharing

waiting fOr ur New

peace

 

cute angel

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hiiiii sis

as usual....great work
words can not describe how much i like it.....wonderful
*
the dream....it's a thing seems to be very close to reach.....but in fact....it's very far from the reality
*
keep on sis

thank you

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii,Marjourey

I'm so happy to see you in that topic my dear

as usual tour replies give me encouragement

thanks a lot
 

basma nana

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Hello sister

God willing, fine

As usual, excelled in your subject

And fabricated in the selection of Title


Dream

We all live the dreams that drive us to success

Thanks for the topic of this unique and expressive words

Wait for the new
 

cute angel

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Hi,besma

Thanks a lot for that nice explanation for my poem

it means you've understood the meaning

thanks again
 

kokazita

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hii girl

waaaw a new topic

i like it

gOOd JoB gIrL

:heh:

really we can feel ur own feelings through ur words

keep on sis

tHnX

 

Amira ~

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you have to be gifted sis
very nice words
best wishes for you to success
 

Dr.CrAzY

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ladies & gentlemen
tonight we are
with
the new start of the english forum
Ms.cuuuuuuuuuuute angel


yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
yeaaaaaaaaah

cuuute angel w'll
present her
poem
in the tittle off

The mummified dream

:scared:
wait wait
we have one from the spectators
who wanna say something

ehem ehem
hi

I'm Dr.CrAzY
I wanna just say
that
i like your poem So SO
much

Especially this part

I was like Hiraclius
Who done the twelve orders
I was like Alexander the Great
Who passed all borders
But both died without reaching
Their bigest dreams
And so do I,I'm dead waiting to be alive


you have done
a great job
*
congratulation
sis
&
thx for this great work

:re_gards:
 

cute angel

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hii girl


waaaw a new topic

i like it

gOOd JoB gIrL

:heh:

really we can feel ur own feelings through ur words

keep on sis

tHnX

Hello,Kokazita

I like your name ^_^

thanks a lot for the sweet comments

they mean a lot to me

I'm always longing to read your comments

thanks a lot
 

cute angel

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ladies & gentlemen

tonight we are
with
the new start of the english forum
Ms.cuuuuuuuuuuute angel


yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
yeaaaaaaaaah

cuuute angel w'll
present her
poem
in the tittle off

The mummified dream

:scared:
wait wait
we have one from the spectators
who wanna say something

ehem ehem
hi

I'm Dr.CrAzY
I wanna just say
that
i like your poem So SO
much

Especially this part

I was like Hiraclius
Who done the twelve orders
I was like Alexander the Great
Who passed all borders
But both died without reaching
Their bigest dreams
And so do I,I'm dead waiting to be alive

you have done
a great job
*
congratulation
sis
&
thx for this great work

:re_gards:

thanks a lot brother for this good comment

thanks a lot

thanks

regards
 

angel

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I'm dead waiting to be alive

again



wOoOw i like it to mUch


good jOb girl

keep on writing



i like your job



thank's a lot for sharing Us your wOrds



thhhhhhhhhhhhx


 

cute angel

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Hi ,Angel

it's me who has to thank you for your nice comments as usual
 

Dr.Odd

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The mummified Dream

I'm just a dream got wings to fly
Upon the lakes under the blue sky.
I swim and talk,walk and play;
Sometimes I laugh and others I cry







Upon the silver large lakes
Under the snow soft flakes
I used to fly and see the lake shakes
And a lot of hope bubbles it makes






I was on my way to catch my train
which was covered with drops of rain
To reach the end of the race and gain
But it wasn't a train just a ruin






I was like Hercules
Who done the twelve orders
I was like Alexander the Great
Who passed all borders
But both died without reaching
Their biggest dreams
And so do I,I'm dead waiting to be alive






again

I'm mummified and been hidden under the big oak tree
Waiting for an archeologist to come and find me
I'm just like a phoenix
From ashes I come to life
wait for me and you'll see

31/3/2009

at 9.45 p.m

__________cute angel________
:heh:




i thought, i am in old age
myths , tales ...,thank thee magic hopes crazy dreams
only good very good can be told here

:re_gards:

 

cute angel

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Peace be upon you brother

your replies are always unique full of pictures

that's a good way of replies and comments

I'm happy coz my poem had such effect upon you,it took you to ancient times and dreams are the only thing that can make the past come to life again

thanks alot for that kind passage

regards
 

hadjer92

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wooow ,,so nice poem, so nice words , i do like it ! youuuuu r the forum's poetry ! love youuu sis
 
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