The mummified dream

[cute angel]

The mummified Dream

I'm just a dream got wings to fly
Upon the lakes under the blue sky.
I swim and talk,walk and play;
Sometimes I laugh and others I cry

Upon the silver large lakes
Under the snow soflt flakes
I used to fly and see the lake shakes
And a lot of hope bubbles it makes

I was on my way to catch my train
which was covered with drops of rain
To reach the end of the race and gain
But it wasn't a train just a ruin

I was like Hiraclius
Who done the twelve orders
I was like Alexander the Great
Who passed all borders
But both died without reaching
Their bigest dreams
And so do I,I'm dead waiting to be alive

again

I'm mummified and been hiden under the big oak tree
Waiting for an archeologist to come and find me
I'm just like a phoenix
From ashes I come to life
wait for me and you'll see

31/3/2009

at 9.45 p.m
__________cute angel________
:heh:​

 

[مارجوري]

hiiiii sis
as usual....great work
words can not describe how much i like it.....wonderful
*
the dream....it's a thing seems to be very close to reach.....but in fact....it's very far from the reality
*
keep on sis
thank you​

 

[shy_girl]

gOod wOrK
I like it
Keep up always with the best

Thx fOr Sharing

waiting fOr ur New

peace
​

 

[cute angel]

hiiiii sis

as usual....great work
words can not describe how much i like it.....wonderful
*
the dream....it's a thing seems to be very close to reach.....but in fact....it's very far from the reality
*
keep on sis

thank you​

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii,Marjourey

I'm so happy to see you in that topic my dear

as usual tour replies give me encouragement

thanks a lot​

 

[cute angel]

gOod wOrK

I like it
Keep up always with the best​

Thx fOr Sharing ​

waiting fOr ur New ​

peace​

Hello,shy girl

thanks a lot for the sweet comments I like it so much

Thanks a bunch

Regards​

 

[basma nana]

Hello sister
​

God willing, fine
​

As usual, excelled in your subject
​

And fabricated in the selection of Title


Dream
​

We all live the dreams that drive us to success
​

Thanks for the topic of this unique and expressive words
​

Wait for the new​

 

[cute angel]

Hi,besma

Thanks a lot for that nice explanation for my poem

it means you've understood the meaning

thanks again​

 

[يونس الصديق]

ohhhhhhh

good work friend

dream and dream and dream


nice topic
thank you


greeting...............

 

[kokazita]

hii girl

waaaw a new topic

i like it

gOOd JoB gIrL

:heh:

really we can feel ur own feelings through ur words

keep on sis

tHnX
​

 

[Amira ~]

you have to be gifted sis
very nice words
best wishes for you to success​

 

[Dr.CrAzY]

ladies & gentlemen
tonight we are
with
the new start of the english forum
Ms.cuuuuuuuuuuute angel


yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
yeaaaaaaaaah

cuuute angel w'll
present her
poem
in the tittle off

The mummified dream

:scared:
wait wait
we have one from the spectators
who wanna say something

ehem ehem
hi

I'm Dr.CrAzY
I wanna just say
that
i like your poem So SO
much

Especially this part

I was like Hiraclius
Who done the twelve orders
I was like Alexander the Great
Who passed all borders
But both died without reaching
Their bigest dreams
And so do I,I'm dead waiting to be alive

you have done
a great job
*
congratulation
sis
&
thx for this great work

:re_gards:
​

 

[cute angel]

ohhhhhhh

good work friend

dream and dream and dream


nice topic
thank you


greeting...............

Peace be upon you brother

thanks a lot for the kind comment

regards​

 

[cute angel]

hii girl​

waaaw a new topic​

i like it​

gOOd JoB gIrL​

:heh:​

really we can feel ur own feelings through ur words​

keep on sis​

tHnX​

​

Hello,Kokazita

I like your name ^_^

thanks a lot for the sweet comments

they mean a lot to me

I'm always longing to read your comments

thanks a lot​

 

[cute angel]

you have to be gifted sis

very nice words

best wishes for you to success​

Hi,sweety

thanks a lot for being here

I like your comments so much they give me encouragement

regards​

 

[cute angel]

ladies & gentlemen

tonight we are
with
the new start of the english forum
Ms.cuuuuuuuuuuute angel​

yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
yeaaaaaaaaah​

cuuute angel w'll
present her
poem
in the tittle off​

The mummified dream​

:scared:
wait wait
we have one from the spectators
who wanna say something​

ehem ehem
hi ​

I'm Dr.CrAzY
I wanna just say
that
i like your poem So SO
much​

Especially this part​

I was like Hiraclius
Who done the twelve orders
I was like Alexander the Great
Who passed all borders
But both died without reaching
Their bigest dreams
And so do I,I'm dead waiting to be alive​

you have done
a great job
*
congratulation
sis
&
thx for this great work​

:re_gards:​

thanks a lot brother for this good comment

thanks a lot

thanks

regards​

 

[angel]

I'm dead waiting to be alive

again


wOoOw i like it to mUch


good jOb girl

keep on writing



i like your job



thank's a lot for sharing Us your wOrds



thhhhhhhhhhhhx


​

 

[cute angel]

Hi ,Angel

it's me who has to thank you for your nice comments as usual​

 

[Dr.Odd]

The mummified Dream

I'm just a dream got wings to fly
Upon the lakes under the blue sky.
I swim and talk,walk and play;
Sometimes I laugh and others I cry
​

Upon the silver large lakes
Under the snow soft flakes
I used to fly and see the lake shakes
And a lot of hope bubbles it makes

I was on my way to catch my train
which was covered with drops of rain
To reach the end of the race and gain
But it wasn't a train just a ruin

I was like Hercules
Who done the twelve orders
I was like Alexander the Great
Who passed all borders
But both died without reaching
Their biggest dreams
And so do I,I'm dead waiting to be alive

again

I'm mummified and been hidden under the big oak tree
Waiting for an archeologist to come and find me
I'm just like a phoenix
From ashes I come to life
wait for me and you'll see

31/3/2009

at 9.45 p.m
__________cute angel________
:heh:

i thought, i am in old age
myths , tales ...,thank thee magic hopes crazy dreams
only good very good can be told here

:re_gards:
​

 

[cute angel]

Peace be upon you brother

your replies are always unique full of pictures

that's a good way of replies and comments

I'm happy coz my poem had such effect upon you,it took you to ancient times and dreams are the only thing that can make the past come to life again

thanks alot for that kind passage

regards​

 

[hadjer92]

wooow ,,so nice poem, so nice words , i do like it ! youuuuu r the forum's poetry ! love youuu sis​